Your graphic relates to your story in every way we were told. Some of the comments that point to you weren't mentioned in the story, such as "didn't your parents raise you right?" It might not make sense to some people who wouldn't understand that sort of comment, so it can be changed.
You can't use a silhouette. Make the words a bit larger so we can see it easier. Also, I feel like there is too much words that distract the viewer from the actual picture. Lastly, I think you need to add more pictures in the Graphic poster.
The design for your Coming of Age poster is very clear, but I'm not sure if it really "hits" the idea of Coming of Age. We can tell that this is a theater and that a person is in the middle (silhouette). We understand what the setting is, and that this person shouldn't be watching this movie (made clear through the middle pieces of text). Purpose is something that I would improve with this poster.
Critiquing from a technical point of view, the graphics are simple and easy to understand. My eyes moved cohesively through the different phrases you had and I could understand their theme. The tilt that they have is quite interesting, but I recommend tilting them all inwards towards the person (the bottom ones just seem odd). Other than that, the structure to it is fine. But expand! There's so many approaches you can try since there's such minimal requirements. Maybe a different angle.
Your graphic relates to your story in every way we were told. Some of the comments that point to you weren't mentioned in the story, such as "didn't your parents raise you right?" It might not make sense to some people who wouldn't understand that sort of comment, so it can be changed.
ReplyDeleteYou can't use a silhouette. Make the words a bit larger so we can see it easier. Also, I feel like there is too much words that distract the viewer from the actual picture. Lastly, I think you need to add more pictures in the Graphic poster.
ReplyDeleteThe design for your Coming of Age poster is very clear, but I'm not sure if it really "hits" the idea of Coming of Age. We can tell that this is a theater and that a person is in the middle (silhouette). We understand what the setting is, and that this person shouldn't be watching this movie (made clear through the middle pieces of text). Purpose is something that I would improve with this poster.
ReplyDeleteCritiquing from a technical point of view, the graphics are simple and easy to understand. My eyes moved cohesively through the different phrases you had and I could understand their theme. The tilt that they have is quite interesting, but I recommend tilting them all inwards towards the person (the bottom ones just seem odd). Other than that, the structure to it is fine. But expand! There's so many approaches you can try since there's such minimal requirements. Maybe a different angle.